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Untitled - Addiction Entry by ~Braenuun:iconBraenuun:



Through my veins,
runs my addiction,
and blood is not it.

From this very screen,
another pleasure,
fills my senses.

Nostalgia was reborn,
and took me in,
and thus my addiction began.

The story of humanity,
fighting to survive,
is becoming my every breath.

Vipers flying through the sky,
firing at Raiders on the horizon,
in a race to find this Earth.

Basestars and Battlestars,
with kilotons of ballistics,
flying between the two.

Humans and Cylons,
pointing fingers and stealing,
like the squabbling children we are.

My addiction is the tragedy,
that plagues this very world,
and the good that I want to come.

But will we ever stop?
Will a cease in the violence show,
enough for the seed of peace to grow.

Without being crushed or poisoned,
killed out of envious spite,
just because you wanted the limelight.

I’m addicted to a fantasy,
a Sci-fi show,
and it’s not real.

With every minute,
of every episode,
I see sense in everything I’m shown.
©2008-2009 ~Braenuun
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this is for :iconwriteaway:'s addiction contest...

i'm addicted to battlestar galactica...=D
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Pretty good, though in the last two stanzas you suddenly changed out of ramblings and went back to reality... That kind of killed the moment.

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"There is no enemy. There is no victory. Only boys who lost their lives in the sand." - Sabaton, Cliffs of Gallipoli
understood...

...but the things my addiction is to something thats not real, an idea that seldom has a chance to grow...

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Will u love the "u" u hide if I but call your name?
Will u quell the fear inside and never b the same?
Will u use the faith uve found 2 reshape the world around,
thru my sight and touch and sound in u and u in me?
That is true.

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"There is no enemy. There is no victory. Only boys who lost their lives in the sand." - Sabaton, Cliffs of Gallipoli
My poison of choice is the internet, but I symp with you here. You sound very resigned about your addiction, I love it.

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Conform yourselves to what I say
and everything will be okay
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:blackrose: PROJECT R: [link] If you're nice I'll return watches too.
resigned about my addiction?

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Will u love the "u" u hide if I but call your name?
Will u quell the fear inside and never b the same?
Will u use the faith uve found 2 reshape the world around,
thru my sight and touch and sound in u and u in me?
NERD! but seriously, that was actually really cool. I like how you can add peace into something like that.

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Peace
>. < i thought u asked how i could get peace in t here...and i was looking like "what are you talking about," then i read ur comment again and saw it wasnt a question...heeh

thank you

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Will u love the "u" u hide if I but call your name?
Will u quell the fear inside and never b the same?
Will u use the faith uve found 2 reshape the world around,
thru my sight and touch and sound in u and u in me?
I quite like the last couple of stanzas... its like, this is an amazingly cool TV show... you can hear the giddyness... but as it develops its suddenly grows dark that your addiction is to war. I really like it, a unique take on a common 'love-of-tv" theme. Excellent!

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And the pen scribbled forever more
thank you...

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Will u love the "u" u hide if I but call your name?
Will u quell the fear inside and never b the same?
Will u use the faith uve found 2 reshape the world around,
thru my sight and touch and sound in u and u in me?

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