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You Know What to Do by ~Braenuun:iconBraenuun:



Within our minds,
We hold the keys,
To wealth untold,
And perfect harmony.

A place where life,
And all other things,
Are perfect and good,
Where life itself sings.

You want that place,
And I want it, too.
So, if you want it,
You know what to do,

Because that’s the key,
And if you’ve lost it,
I’ll remind you now,
Tell you a bit.

Act as you’re perfect,
And you’ll get there,
And others around,
Will stop and stare.

They’ll catch on,
And act the same,
And eventually,
There’ll be no blame,

For nothing will be wrong,
All will be right,
Every evil thing,
Will be out of sight.

So don’t let this world,
Get the best of you,
‘Cause you’re the key,
You know what to do.
©2008-2009 ~Braenuun
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woo, rapid thought...5 min work! now this is for a contest from :iconwhydoidothiseveryday: about Utopia, and i hope i win!! as always i hope as such...but all the contests havent ended yet! yay anxiety, or eagerness... =\...w/e :typerhappy: <--- he's awesome!!
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Good rhythym, and the end is very haunting. I must once more hope you win :P.

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Conform yourselves to what I say
and everything will be okay
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:blackrose: PROJECT R: [link] If you're nice I'll return watches too.
nice

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BSG, BSG, BSG all I think about... My life, love, and world. It's all happened before and it will all happen again.
- Looking4Angels
thank you... :yawn: im tired...and not in school...hehe =D

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Will u love the "u" u hide if I but call your name?
Will u quell the fear inside and never b the same?
Will u use the faith uve found 2 reshape the world around,
thru my sight and touch and sound in u and u in me?
Gah, lucky. :P

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Conform yourselves to what I say
and everything will be okay
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:blackrose: PROJECT R: [link] If you're nice I'll return watches too.
indeedums!

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Will u love the "u" u hide if I but call your name?
Will u quell the fear inside and never b the same?
Will u use the faith uve found 2 reshape the world around,
thru my sight and touch and sound in u and u in me?
Thats a pretty cool poem. I really like how you show the goodness of humanity...in my opinion at least. I am a pacifist so i love the idea of people knowing what to do to help.

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Peace
just wait for all the bad stuff to pass...i know, but it never seems to...and i've been getting verbally agressive against hipocrasy and it's leading me somewhere...no idea where, though

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Will u love the "u" u hide if I but call your name?
Will u quell the fear inside and never b the same?
Will u use the faith uve found 2 reshape the world around,
thru my sight and touch and sound in u and u in me?
well find out, its always great to have a purpose

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Peace
i've got trouble enough trying to decide what to do...i cant decide which path i like more

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Will u love the "u" u hide if I but call your name?
Will u quell the fear inside and never b the same?
Will u use the faith uve found 2 reshape the world around,
thru my sight and touch and sound in u and u in me?

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